Character Designs: Tattoos – St. Patrick’s Day Edition

So, in honor of St. Patrick’s day, I thought I would post part of a character design that’s in keeping with the tradition of the day. When I was working on one of my novels, A College Affair, I designed on of the characters with a St. Patrick’s inspired tattoo.

I had already designed a cross tattoo for him, and shamrocks are what is typically associated with St. Patrick, but I didn’t want just a typical shamrock design. So I thought about it for bit, and this is what I came up with:


Close-up of Reagan’s Tattoo

The words might be a little bit hard to see, but it’s the Lorica of St. Patrick. It’s also known as the St. Patrick’s Breastplate Prayer. I used three of the stanzas for this tattoo:

I arise today through a mighty strength,
       the invocation of the Trinity,
       Through the belief in the Threeness,
       through confession of the Oneness,
       Of the Creator of Creation.

        Christ with me
        Christ before me
        Christ behind me,
        Christ in me,
        Christ beneath me,
        Christ above me,
        Christ on my right,
        Christ on my left,
        Christ in breadth,
        Christ in length,
        Christ in height,
        Christ in the heart,
        Of everyman who thinks of me,
        Christ in the mouth,
        Of everyman who speaks of me.

        I arise today,
        Through God’s strength to pilot me,
        God’s might to uphold me,
        God’s wisdom to guide me,
        God’s way to lie before me,
        God’s shield to protect me,
        God’s host to secure me.

I thought about adding some green to it, but I think I like it better in simple black and white. I also really like the idea of drawing out any tattoos that you give a character. Even if it’s just a quick sketch, I think it helps to flesh out the character even more.

Also, I’m not a fan of giving a character a tattoo just for the sake of having a tattoo. In story, Reagan and Kenna both have stories behind their tattoos. This is definetly my personal view flooring my writing, but sometimes that happens. But if you’re going to go to the trouble of describing a character’s tattoo, give some reason for them having it, other than “LOL!it looks cool!!:D”.

Unless it was a tattoo that a character got when they were young and didn’t know better. But hey, there’s a story right there.

I guess that goes for anything you go out of your way to mention about a character: explain why you mentioned it.

So, look at that. I managed to tie in something to do with St. Patrick’s day and writing thoughts and characterization in one blog post. Not entirely sure what we talked about all through Biology today, but hey! Happy St. Patrick’s Day!

Also, excuse any typos; this was written entirely on my Kindle Fire. Not the best thing for a long blog post.



       So, I’m still working on The Witch Queen’s War. I haven’t been working on it everyday, but I’ve not put it aside completely yet, either. I’m hoping to work on it some more during Camp NaNo this year, as April’s project. I’ve put in my word count goal as only 35,000, since that’s going to be my last month of school, with finals on the horizon, so I need to be flexible. 

       But, for once, I actually did an outline for the story. As in, I have most of the major, and several of the minor, plot points already worked out. 

        I do mean several. The outline is five pages long on its own…

       I cannot honestly remember the last time I actually did an outline. It was probably back in senior English. And I don’t think I’ve ever actually done one for my personal writing before. I know that I’ve never done one for a NaNo project before.

       “But how can you write a novel without an outline?”


My very unusual looking outline

       I start with an idea, and then I just sit down and type. In my mind, if the story is strong enough to keep coming out, then I don’t feel  like I need an outline. If the story just kind of dies off, well, maybe I wasn’t in to it as much as I could have been. Or maybe the idea could have been better. When that happens, I never delete what I’ve written. I just shelve it and keep it stored in its own little folder on my laptop. It’s ready and waiting if I ever want to come back to it.

       Don’t get me wrong, I understand the advantages of having an outline. Otherwise, I wouldn’t have done one. When I do an outline, I’m usually trying to get something done within a certain period of time. And an outline can do that. My outline looks more like a list than an actual outline, but I have plot points that I want to use, all laid out in the right order. That’s going to save me a lot of time. Otherwise, I’ll remember that I had a really great idea for a certain point, but won’t exactly remember where or how I wanted it to go, and that becomes tedious.

       “But doesn’t that take away the fun of surprising yourself with unfolding plot points?”


        Plot points still surprise you, they just do it when you’re writing out the outline, not the story. And that’s a little better than having it surprise you in a story. In an outline, you can easily rearrange plot points to incorporate any surprises and bursts of brilliance. It’s not as easy to do in the actual story, believe me. There’s a whole lot of backtracking and rewriting involved in that path.

        Also, with an outline like the one I’ve done, it makes it a lot easier to write scenes out of order, which I encourage if you feel like it won’t derail your own process. There’s no point in being stuck on a certain point, wasting time staring at a blinking cursor, when you can skip to another section and be more productive, then come back to the trouble spot later. And an outline makes it easier to go back and put them in the correct order.

        Both ways of writing have pros and cons, but when it comes to writing for a deadline, I’m beginning to think that an outline is the best option. I never thought I’d say it, but I might be converting from pantser to planner.