CampNano July 2015

So apparently CampNano has come quite a way since the last time I participated. Now, not only can you choose your own genre, you’ve got a much more varied selection of categories, including a “revision” option.


Along with the fact that I can change my “word count” goal, I might just wait until July starts to start working on editing Ashes. One hour of editing equals 1,000 words, so I’m pretty sure I can find the time to do at least 25 to 30 hours of editing, even with class everyday and working.

And on that subject, does drawing a big, giant X over multiple paragraphs count as editing? Because that’s what I feel like doing with parts of this work. I’m going to wind up scrapping whole pages of this piece, I’m pretty sure. I’ve already taken out whole chunks of the outline. I’m also hoping to make the chapters shorter, too. When I put the current version of the document into the formatted 6″x9″ form, the chapters have gotten way too long.

So, at this point, I am giving serious consideration to doing CampNano. If anyone is interested in adding me as a friend there, or sharing a cabin, feel free to send me a message, either here or on there. My author name is MayuuyaHakusho there, too.

In other news, I have a new little writing area. I did away with my drafting table in favor of a writing desk, since I’ll get more use out of a desk, I think. The desk came from my grandmother, the same IMG_20150610_010524695one that passed away last november during NaNo, as did the two lamps on either side of it. It isn’t usually quite this cluttered, since I’m actually a bit of a neat freak about my work spaces like this, but I was working on several things at once when I took this picture. The little folded up things that are spread around on my laptop are a series of like 100 or so prompts that I found online and put on to little half size notebook cards then folded and put into a bag to use if I need them later.
The desk is a bit small, but it suits my needs for the time being.




       So, I’m still working on The Witch Queen’s War. I haven’t been working on it everyday, but I’ve not put it aside completely yet, either. I’m hoping to work on it some more during Camp NaNo this year, as April’s project. I’ve put in my word count goal as only 35,000, since that’s going to be my last month of school, with finals on the horizon, so I need to be flexible. 

       But, for once, I actually did an outline for the story. As in, I have most of the major, and several of the minor, plot points already worked out. 

        I do mean several. The outline is five pages long on its own…

       I cannot honestly remember the last time I actually did an outline. It was probably back in senior English. And I don’t think I’ve ever actually done one for my personal writing before. I know that I’ve never done one for a NaNo project before.

       “But how can you write a novel without an outline?”


My very unusual looking outline

       I start with an idea, and then I just sit down and type. In my mind, if the story is strong enough to keep coming out, then I don’t feel  like I need an outline. If the story just kind of dies off, well, maybe I wasn’t in to it as much as I could have been. Or maybe the idea could have been better. When that happens, I never delete what I’ve written. I just shelve it and keep it stored in its own little folder on my laptop. It’s ready and waiting if I ever want to come back to it.

       Don’t get me wrong, I understand the advantages of having an outline. Otherwise, I wouldn’t have done one. When I do an outline, I’m usually trying to get something done within a certain period of time. And an outline can do that. My outline looks more like a list than an actual outline, but I have plot points that I want to use, all laid out in the right order. That’s going to save me a lot of time. Otherwise, I’ll remember that I had a really great idea for a certain point, but won’t exactly remember where or how I wanted it to go, and that becomes tedious.

       “But doesn’t that take away the fun of surprising yourself with unfolding plot points?”


        Plot points still surprise you, they just do it when you’re writing out the outline, not the story. And that’s a little better than having it surprise you in a story. In an outline, you can easily rearrange plot points to incorporate any surprises and bursts of brilliance. It’s not as easy to do in the actual story, believe me. There’s a whole lot of backtracking and rewriting involved in that path.

        Also, with an outline like the one I’ve done, it makes it a lot easier to write scenes out of order, which I encourage if you feel like it won’t derail your own process. There’s no point in being stuck on a certain point, wasting time staring at a blinking cursor, when you can skip to another section and be more productive, then come back to the trouble spot later. And an outline makes it easier to go back and put them in the correct order.

        Both ways of writing have pros and cons, but when it comes to writing for a deadline, I’m beginning to think that an outline is the best option. I never thought I’d say it, but I might be converting from pantser to planner.